I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “Daddy check for monsters under my bed.” I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, “Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.”
I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “Daddy check for monsters under my bed.” I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, “Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.”
this kid in my class stole this and still got marked for homework even after he got caught
Well, this is a movie now. I hope OP got money for this.
Powerful.
Not creepy due to many spelling and grammar errors. 1/10. I do however challenge someone to make a story off of this submission and improve upon it or for the original author to do this themselves. It is always interesting for an author to update a story they wrote long ago. It is equally as interesting to see another writer twist it their own way.
Woah, freaky
4/5
short and awesome
As someone who struggles to enjoy lengthy pastas, I really appreciate short ones that capture the essence in just a few words.
i can not believe that simple 5 lines can be this creepy .. nice job
I would scared for near death if something like that happen to me
Omg they are twins.lol can’t believe that happened. I give 10/10 it’s amazing. I’m wondering what will happen to the kid under the bed.
Yes, they’re twins
The real one is the _______
Nice. Short but creepy, but maybe more on the children?
My new favorite!!!!
And then the wife comes in and says “SURPRISE WE HAD TWINS”
I liked this story a lot it was really good i didn’t expect that at all
Is there any way to favorite pastas? I loved this one n I wanna save it 🙁
Das Some Gud Pasta friend
Spooks
I saw this on facebook.