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Masterpiece

I’ve been lying down for hours now. It’s 5:35AM and there’s not much I can do. You know what the worst part about my situation is? I’m in the same room with my parents. They keep looking at me, and I can’t help but look back and try not to cry or scream. Their eyes are focused on me and their mouths are wide open. There’s the strong scent of blood and I feel so paralyzed with fear.

Here’s the thing. The second I make any hint that I’m not asleep anymore, I’m completely fucked. I will die and there’s nobody around to save me. I’ve been trying to think of a way out but the only idea I have is to rush for the door and run outside the front door and scream for help, hoping any neighbors hear me. It’s risky, but if I stay here, I’ll surely die. He’s waiting for me to wake up and see his masterpiece.

You’re probably wondering what’s going on. I do get ahead of myself sometimes.

About three hours ago, I heard screaming from the other side of the house. I got up and went to check on the noise before realizing I had to use the restroom. Instead of doing the smart thing and investigating, I used the bathroom first. I could’ve gotten myself killed right then from my stupid actions. But I actually did my business and took a peek outside the bathroom. There was blood on the carpet. I got very worried and ran back to my room, hiding under my sheets like the pussy I was. I tried to convince myself to go back to sleep, that it was just some really vivid dream or something.

But I heard my bedroom door open. Like the terrified child I was, I peeked from under my blankets to see what was going on. I could see something dragging my dead parents into the room. It was not human, I can tell you that. It was hairless, with no eyes and no clothing. It walked like a caveman, with its back slouched as it dragged my parents. But this thing was much smarter than any caveman. It was aware of what it was doing.

It propped my dad up on the edge of my bed, and made him face me. It then sat my mother down in the chair and positioned her towards me as well. It then started rubbing its hands upon the walls, staining them with blood and then drew a circle with the devil’s pentagram in it. This thing had made what it would probably call a masterpiece. To finish it off, it scribbled a message onto the wall that I could not read in the darkness.

It then positioned itself under my bed, waiting to strike.

The scariest thing is now, my eyes have adjusted to the darkness since then and I can read the message on the wall. I don’t want to look at it, because it’s terrifying to think about. But I feel I need to see, before I’m killed.

I peek at the creature’s masterpiece.

“I know you’re awake.”

Original Author: Unknown
18 comments on “Masterpiece
  1. The narative voice ruined this for me – It makes it seem too casual, especially in the intro.

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    485 days ago
  2. This is fantistic, really good, keep writing Creepypastas

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    429 days ago
  3. Good Job!

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    394 days ago
  4. OMG
    Monster cave men under my bed holy crap WHAT
    Freaking out. ;-;

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    391 days ago
  5. Too good keep up the good work

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    352 days ago
  6. frightening no doubt.

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    350 days ago
  7. I think this is highly under-rated. I LOVE IT.
    People are complaining of the casual tone at the beginning, I think that compliments the over-all shock factor at when you realise what’s actually going on in the story.

    9/10 kiddo, keep it up :)

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    308 days ago
  8. Never, never EVER in my life have I ever heard someone screaming bloody murder and thought, “well shit, I really need to piss.”

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    274 days ago
  9. This is one of those stories that makes you want to paint with blood.

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    259 days ago
  10. when i was finished i looked under my bed…

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    234 days ago
  11. *Note to self: Keep the gun under the pillow loaded.*

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    203 days ago
  12. great pasta keep it up, man

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    105 days ago
  13. That creeped me out big time. This is not an easy feat. Well done!

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    97 days ago
  14. Really good, nice and creepy. Keep up the good work

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    92 days ago
  15. Final sentence is what got me. Spooky!

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    85 days ago
  16. Trying to find the author of this material? Wish to make a short film about it. Full credits will be giving. If you know or can direct me to his or her work that would be awesome! Would be ashame for it not to be made, awesome work. – Shane – acid.inks@hotmail.com

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    45 days ago
  17. I love this one

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    43 days ago
  18. OH MAH GAWD! THERE’S A NAKED CAVE MAN THAT DREW AND WROTE ON MY BEDROOM WALL THEN SLEPT UNDER MY BED!!!

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    24 days ago
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